In the modern epoach, Travelling's trend mushrooming at higher rate people travel from one nation to other and when visitors visiting overseas nation they easily learn culture and tradition about that nation with the help of their lifestyle, customs, ocassions and etc. I shall intend to clear how they learn and why travellers try to learn about culture and traditions. A number of argument surround my views im upcoming paragraphs.
Confabulation the statement, a number of reasons how folks can learn their culture and tradition. First and foremost, folks move from one nation to another for travelling because they want to learn different culture and tradition and it is learn from their language who are lived in foreign countries. Secondly, ocassions are celebrated all over the globe when visitors participate in those events they can easily learn about their culture. Thirdly, travellers talk with those who are permanent resident in international countries because they know each and everything about that hub.Futhermore, people learn culture from international websites because they provide alots information about their nation. Every nation have their personal website like as www.canada.com
on the other side, every individual want to enhance their knowledge and they want to learn different culture and tradition because they fed up their boring lifestyle. Moreover, some people strive to know because they want to start their business in foreign countries for more earnings. For instance, in india students move to overseas at alarming rate and when they familiar with foreign nation's culture they start their business after study.
To recapitulate, no doubt today's generation fed up their lifestyle so they want to learn different culture. People easily learn different culture with the of website, customs, religion, ocassions and etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50699300699 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71563097129 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496503496503 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7267795386 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.25 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378294787788 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16389265649 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881815473954 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252326805854 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080146780806 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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