While it is sometimes thought that prison is the best place for criminals, others believe that there are better ways to deal with them. What is your opinion?
Some people say that offenders should be given a custodial sentence because it is the most suitable punishment for them. In my opinion, while imprisonment, perhaps, is an ideal way to prevent criminals from committing illegal activities again, other solutions such as education and community laboring could produce a more significant outcome.
In terms of imprisonment, the main reason for applying this type of punishment to criminals is that governments want them to contrite their actions and behaviors in a separated place. These behaviors including recklessness, desire, or even being susceptible to many temptations need a particular amount of time to eliminate from their thoughts. Depending on the consequence of crimes that offenders will be put in jail for a specific period. For example, in the case of drug trafficking, they tend to stay in prison for about 20 to 30 years, which are virtually threefold that of pickpockets and shoplifting.
Apart from the influence of imprisonment expressed above, two alternatives including education and community laboring have a more significant effect in the long-run. First, education provides thorough insights into the negative impact of illegal activities, which accordingly helps criminals to be more open-minded and develops better attitudes and behaviors. Second, community laboring is also a good option because several activities such as planting trees, building houses, and cleaning up local parks could help them not only forget about regretful moments in the past but also become a more law-abiding citizen in the future.
In conclusion, although some people think that putting in jail is the best option to punish criminals nowadays, I, however, believe that providing proper education and social jobs is more positive and has better outcomes to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, second, so, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52669039146 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98743373562 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629893238434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1288102848 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.3 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140792051872 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506060349949 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364899640177 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833916210902 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372631877002 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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