While some people may dispute that sports professionals’ income is too high compared to people working in other areas, I think that it is completely fair when they are paid such interesting salaries.
While some people may dispute that sports professionals’ income is too high compared to people working in other areas, I think that it is completely fair when they are paid such interesting salaries.
There are some reasons for the notion that sportspeople are earning too much money. Firstly, they do not provide vital service but the wages for that are extremely high. Sport is just a type of entertainment and people can live happily without professional sports. For example, football is the most favorite sport in the world, but if football had never been invented, humans would still survive on the earth. Secondly, There are a lot of other jobs that need to be valued because of the irreplaceable roles in the human life. For instance, teachers, nurses, doctors, are doing crucial responsibilities for society, so they deserve to be appreciated much and paid higher salaries than sportspeople.
Despite the above argument, I believe that sports professionals are worthy to receive the top compensation and benefits. Sport is a multi-million-pound industry. Because it is the intellectual food of people all over the world, televised games or events attract a huge number of viewers and audiences of sports fans who are willing to pay for their favorite matches. Moreover, being a top sportsperson requires hours of practice. To reach a particular level in their area, they have to sacrifice many things including their rest time, entertainment, sleep, well-being and even their interests to undergo a long interval of practice under harsh conditions and stringent requirements. They are also faced with many risks including injury, mental pressure and fears of being not respected.
In conclusion, salaries paid to sportspeople are dramatically high but how much they earn is corresponding to their exertion and the value they bring to the human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26050420168 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04301483234 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668067226891 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3806950589 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16750931619 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543070753819 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327491063857 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12334289257 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210435393785 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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