It is needless to say that media impacts significantly on people’s lives and opinions. It gradually becomes an indispensable part of social lives, and many people think that whoever controls media will have the ultimate power to affect attitudes. In this essay, both viewpoints will be proposed.
On the one hand, several bad influences are constructed when the media dominates the flow of information. First and foremost, mass media can drive citizens’ opinions subjectively. Take teenagers for example. They tend to be gullible and excitable by fake news, leading to misunderstandings and harmful behaviors like body shaming or insulting. Secondly, viewers’ lifestyles are shaped by multimedia and social media. To be precise, the youth might emulate their idols unreasonably, although that style is excessively comical.
On the other hand, certain people do not fall prey to falsely presented information. To begin with, well-educated intellectuals tend to be more skeptical, and they absorb news consciously. Put differently, they will judge whether the information is right or wrong before accepting and sharing. On top of that, there is no longer a monopoly on information ownership, so the inhabitants have more choices for information sources. Hence, the accuracy of news is increased. Additionally, mass media cannot brainwash civilians with sufficient profundity of knowledge as they can overcome general opinions. Last but not least, broadcasters and the press can only regulate what is printed and announced, but they cannot manipulate personal opinions.
To recapitulate briefly, although the media can be utilized as a tool of thought shaping, educated inhabitants can not be brainwashed. Therefore, if a person is equipped with sufficient knowledge, he or she cannot be misled.
- Some people think that some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy ought to be optional instead of compulsory To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 89
- Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this To what extend do you agree or disagree 67
- Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6204379562 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21133873448 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649635036496 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7111180253 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20603507863 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543409260536 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045887648125 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124042731828 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402428740151 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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