Why do more people choose to run their business online? What are the effects of this trend?
Nowadays, most sellers decided to start their business career by the Internet. In this essay, I will explain two reasons why people sell their merchandise on the Internet and what effects they are.
The increasing trend for online business among young adults comes from two major reasons. The most important reason for running an online business is the unlimited access to potential customers via the Internet. For attracting buyers, sellers should launch new products with high quality in order to enhance good reputation. By these ways, a business can increase the demand for the products which can be followed by the increase in sale figures. Next, this trend gives many conveniences not only for business but also comfortable for buyers through online shopping. Online businesses have not to spend much money on opening the traditional store and they can save money this way. Besides, after taking orders, sellers will pass products to their customers by ship services, this course is very quick and convenient.
Online business has advantages and benefits for sellers. The first is cheeseparings money for the beginning of the business and this method is the first step for beginners who decided to start careers although their capitals do not allow for establishing traditional shops.
Second is advertisements for products by websites which businesses update and post pictures of yields. Finally, online shops can activate all the time per day via the Internet. On the other hand, this trend causes some disadvantages for online businesses. The most important problem is swindle from buyers about payments of customers. In addition, the Internet is not really safe because of the low-security level and it maybe reveals personal information of people.
Overall, online business is the most popular method that sellers choose to run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, may, really, second, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30034129693 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6471927915 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580204778157 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4566844275 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3529411765 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317092620232 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100645881853 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744564844488 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187338508263 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594367169391 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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