Why do you think teachers give homework to students?How important is it for students to have homework?Are there any other ways of revising school lessons?Perhaps homework should be abolished. Give your opinion about this.

The amount of homework load is a controversial problem. In my opinion, these exercises are vital for studying.

Teacher make students to do homework in order to strengthen their understanding and reduce schooling time. Knowledge is acquired by numerous practices. For instance, hours of speaking English is a key to have native accent. In addition, the time in class is less than average working time. Therefore, students need to do homework to have proficient education.

On the other hand, children should have time to other activities. I think this problem can be properly resolve by effective schedule.

In conclusion, sufficient homework is beneficial for students.

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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, therefore, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 579.0 1615.20841683 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 105.0 315.596192385 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51428571429 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.20108587294 4.20363070211 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05231780634 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 176.041082164 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 179.1 506.74238477 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.4970965022 49.4020404114 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.9 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.5 20.7667163134 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325059384423 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109275758051 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816178628781 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166637084358 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365986057918 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.2 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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