It is true that the use of the internet gives people more freedom to work and study at home instead of going to work or college. While I understand that this tendency has some advantages. I believe that there are more drawbacks than benefits.
To begin with, there are several merits of teleworking from home and taking online classes. Firstly, As regards adults, teleworking from home is the opportunity to work independently regardless of the geographic location. For example, employees can work for a company in another city or even another country from home via computer without going there. Therefore, they will save time, travel costs and avoid traffic jams. Secondly, progress in narrowing the educational gap between regions will be possible thanks to internet devices. To specify, in areas with less developed education like Africa, along with the development of the internet and smart devices, children will have access to more advanced education from developed countries.
On the other hand, some significant drawbacks can be anticipated from the widespread use of the internet. One obvious downside of working from home is the loss of face-to-face interaction. To explain, when working from home, employees find it more difficult to connect with colleagues because they cannot talk directly or observe the attitudes of others. In addition, compared to on-campus students, online ones can cheat on assessments more easily as they take the tests in their own environment while using personal computers without being observed. As a result, it is unfair to honest students and has a negative effect on academic performance.
In conclusion, while I recognize the possible advantages of the widespread use of the internet, I consider it to be a negative development overall.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...here are more drawbacks than benefits. To begin with, there are several merits ...
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...ed education from developed countries. On the other hand, some significant draw...
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...gative effect on academic performance. In conclusion, while I recognize the pos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as regards, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30985915493 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86965566336 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.58978458 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253706179254 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842680396701 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117957545423 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184750533475 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108982741426 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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