the world is experiencing a dramtic increase in population. this is causing problems not only for poor undeveloped countries, but also, for industralized and developing countries. describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes and suggest solutions for this problem.
today world is experienced a drastic problems caused by overpopultaion and it is also causing problems for underdeveloped and third world nations. this essay will intends to discuss the problems and solutions for increasing population in upcoming paragaraphs. there are enormous number of problems caused by overpopulation. the first and foremost problem always caused to the environment however nature plays a imperative role in the life of human beings and it could be polluted by increasing of population . as a result, these can reduce and effect the ecological.furthermore, the another problem is deforestation which is done by humans to fulfill their own needs. secondly, overpopulation leads to economic problems such as incline of unemploynment rate and finanical benefits to umemployed youth for instance health care, pension, education, and other. as a result these problems are incresed the stress, frustration and mental disorders for individuals. Now move to possible outcomes for this situation, firstly adoption is a good method to reduce popution, today's it has become a solution for people who are interested in starting a new family, yet having concerns about overpopulation awareness campaingns to aware the problems caused by incline in birth rates and these can try to change the social norms about overpopulation in the societies. To conclude, it is crystal clear that overpopulation caused many problems like environmental and economical and there are various solutions to overcome it, such as adoption, awarenes, campagin and clear social doubts about gender discrimination to public well as it is likely seems birth rates inclines but death rates decline at the moment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49042145594 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30928356744 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.834388557 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.222222222 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5555555556 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326192812267 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152033081202 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919715048606 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326192812267 0.151304729494 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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