The world natural resources are being consumed at an ever- increasing rate? What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?
It is undoubtly the case that, depletion of natural resources is 'The burning question of the day.' which is also affecting the mankind adversely. In this essay, I am going to explain the illeffects of this trend and suggest some preventive measures that authorities as well as individuals could implement to mend this problem
The first step is to understand why maximum consumption of natural resources takes place in present scenerio? Broadly speaking, there are mainly three reasons. The first and foremost is increasing natality rate. I have to say that, utilisation of natural resources for example, water, air and soil is directly proportional to the birth rate. Therefore, increasing the birth rate and decreasing mortality rate leads to depletion of environmenral resources. Apart from that lack of education among the young generation is the main cause of this hurdle; as, natural resources for instance, air is a 'part and parcel' of human life but, due to unawareness about their crucial role to survive, people consume them at regular basis in an unappropriate manner. As a result, vandalism of natural resources takes place. Last but not the least, due to advancement in the field of agriculture plethora of chemicals such as D.D.T launched by the authorities which are responsible for vandalism of natural resources.
There are voluminous detrimental effects of continues usage of natural resources. Firstly, due to increase in natality rate level of competition among the same species for food, selter as well as for habitat become increases. Consequently, organisms utilize the natural resources. Secondly, if the people of nation are illetrate then, they are not able to use them in the right manner so, natural resources are not saved for young generation. Thirdly, regular utilizing insecticides and pesticides decrease the fertility of the soil. Moreover, these chemicals also responsible for causing water pollution, which leads to depletion of natural resources; pollution in water bodies is the best epitome of this.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem which gives complexity to its negative outcomes. However, there is one solution to tackle this problem, if seminars, street plays were organized by the authorities to make public aware about the negative impacts of vandalism of natural resources. Besides it, if the government should implement the rule that education is mandatory for everyone. As a result, people become aware about the importance of there kind of resources which were provided by nature. Moreover, nodoubt, famers consume fertilizers to improve the quality of the product but, if use fertilizers like doing organic farming then, we are able to conserve about ninety percent of these resources.
In conclusion, I have to say that, "prevention is better than cure." Therefore, nodoubt, there is no complete solution of this problem but, it can be solved by providing awareness about utilization of chemicals to prevent water bodies as well as soil.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, apart from, as for, broadly speaking, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2562.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 478.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35983263598 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92118537523 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506276150628 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 829.8 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5353893306 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.454545455 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5909090909 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205210224761 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584592384475 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367963276368 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106350675411 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511096236691 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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