In this day and age, overpopulation has drawn a lot of attention from the public. Many countries can not control their birth rates properly. As a result, many of the world's urgent problems are caused by overpopulation. I totally agree with this view and this essay will explain further for this viewpoint.
On one hand, one of the disadvantages of overpopulation is the lower living standart as the income can be divided into more parts. For instance, if everyone spends the same amount of money for health insurance, many of the rich will recieve less than the poor, this caused inequity in our society. Moreover, overpopulation causes unemployment, which leads to many risky consequences such as social's vices, class distinction. To be more specific, if a person can not earn a living by applying for a job, he will do anything to survive, eventhough he can break the laws when he do so. Last but not least, scientists still have not solved the problem of finding a new planet in which we can live. Hence, the Earth is becoming more and more crowded with people, and we have to cut down trees to construct living places. As a result, we are facing climate change, air emission, greenhouse effect and many others environmental problem.
On the other hand, it does also have some worth-pointing sides. Only when there is a low death rate can there be overpopulation, it means we are facing overpopulation due to our good medical background. For example, many health organizations were established such as WHO.
All in all, while there are still some benefits of overpopulation of overpopulation, its limitations are too outweighting in comparison. Governments and individuals should work together to find out the best solution for this trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 576, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...venthough he can break the laws when he do so. Last but not least, scientists stil...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
... organizations were established such as WHO. All in all, while there are still som...
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Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of overpopulation'.
Suggestion: of overpopulation
...ll, while there are still some benefits of overpopulation of overpopulation, its limitations are too outweighting i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97269624573 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06521505571 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5470812824 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092119489421 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034598479863 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716900602493 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489520261692 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524143850977 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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