In bygone days, causes related population was negligible. However, nowadays over-population is major concern is today's world. While It has both negative and positive side, I firmly agree with that most of the problem cause by population in world.
First and foremost, there are numerous factor related to this. Firstly, over-population need then own shelter which is not possible for everyone. We know that there are major part of earth covered by ocean water and remaining for land, where people already made their own shelter. As a result, people who not get the shelter. They make the own house at riverbank or at any high hill, especially those who can not afford money for buying house. Secondly, for living heathy life, people need food, cloths and shelter as prerequisites, which is not possible for everyone and for get to this people sometime take wrong step. For example, many people from low class family do crime for fulfil their family's requirements.
Furthermore, nearly 30% people of world are there, who is illiterates and they do not have proper knowledge about hoe to live happy life. Moreover, they just follow their daily routine work like wake up at the morning, take breakfast with family and go for work and after returning take dinner and go to bad that's it. They do not want to change their mind for new advancement they do not tend to trend which is ongoing with world. A good illustration of this is, people who are famer and working as shopkeeper not have time that they spend quality time with their kith and kin.
On the other hand, new generations kid have courage to do more and in developing countries, they need people who work as employer and help to develop country with their an intelligent knowledge. Moreover, people from 21st century have unmeasurable thought which help in improvement of causes related to growing world s problem. For example, educated people do deep research and make possible to measure distant from moon to earth it is totally done by the new youth who take interest on research.
In conclusion, above both said point are relevant and valid. However, if I consider logically then I strongly agree with that world s major problem is caused by massive amount of population. It is suggested that, government should provide awareness about stop the population by taking some precaution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
... First and foremost, there are numerous factor related to this. Firstly, over-populati...
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Line 3, column 584, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ot possible for everyone and for get to this people sometime take wrong step. For ex...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ter returning take dinner and go to bad thats it. They do not want to change their mi...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... A good illustration of this is, people who are famer and working as shopkeeper not hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93450881612 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58242299041 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561712846348 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1705918421 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.95 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191425148316 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710067707349 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883936503976 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147745305275 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125555228425 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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