The world's most urgent problem is caused by over-population. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that population explosion is the world's pressing issue. While there might be some opposing arguments, I still agree with this view due to more convincing reasons.
On the one hand, this opinion seems unreasonable simply because the most urgent problem in the world is caused by many other reasons. In many parts of the world, for example, wars have led to the deaths of thousands of people and have destroyed homes as well as basic infrastructures. Hence, these people who live in war zones tend to migrate to other countries, and this may cause social problems in host countries
In spite of the arguments above, I highly support this view for the following reasons. Firstly, overpopulation might cause environmental damage. To illustrate, humans often cleared forests to expand their farming and cities. As a consequence, they could have negative impacts on animals' habitats and ecosystem. Another reason is that the population explosion might create social problems in big cities. For instance, overcrowded cities have a high rate of crimes and people live under the poverty line. As a result, the government solves those urgent problems
In conclusion, I recognize possible arguments to reject the discussed view, there are more convincing reasons to believe that this idea is reasonable
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, may, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23222748815 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76250879077 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625592417062 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9756058983 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.363636364 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18315016658 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669171267125 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660837688444 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954255775862 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627007544612 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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