The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.
In this day and age, the issue of why people tend to shift job provokes controversy. This essay will deliberate possible reasons as well as delivering several resolutions.
On the one hand, it is due to the domination of cutting-edge technology and the escalation of demands for the satisfaction of customers that initiate changing occupations among workers. To embark upon, under burgeoning development of state-of-the-art machines, automation is progressively replacing manual labourers. As a consequence, unemployment is becoming relevant among people and there is every likelihood that they will opt for agribusiness in their hometown as a second option. Additionally, the more globalization being ubiquitous, the higher risk of economic disequilibrium among families. To be specific, on account of the ever-increasing desire to cut expenses and increase profits of corporations, employees are under the great strain of whether they should quit their jobs.
To tackle this problem, keeping updated with the current career trend as well as bettering their skills are of paramount importance. In the first instance, only by being creative can workers prove themselves worthy to the job and stand a better chance of being promoted. By way of illustration, the billionaire Jack Ma was jobless and failed to enter universities many times before trying the idea of e-commerce. Secondly, the onus is on the parents and teachers to guide adolescents to the wisest decision. Since teenagers are none too mature to notice what is beneficial for them, they are apt to make mistakes and hence, being regretted in the future.
In conclusion, although erratic changes are evident in modern society, assistance and being up-to-date play a pivotal role in addressing the problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46909090909 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21412173267 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6405925808 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0676189094368 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.020655917858 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0211145187854 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.035209074732 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014681973856 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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