The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Why is it the case? Can you suggest some ways to prepare people to work in the future?
These days, the world of work is quickly changing, hence, humans also need to change and evolve to meet the demands of modern society as well as adapting to the new ways of working and living. In this essay, I will discuss the possible reasons for these changes and suggest some way for people to prepare their future careers.
Firstly, having said that development in hi-tech machines is more and more popular. Thousands of automatic devices are manufactured. This, somehow, workers can lose their work as they are replaced by automated processes. Therefore, the boss can reduce the amount of money paid for workers. Moreover, some large companies have some ways with the ever-increasing desire to cut expenses and increase profit. For example, the Apple company specialized in producing, selling technology devices. Instead of manufacturing in their country, they will build up factories in poor countries and hire workers with low salaries.
However, there are several ways to assist people to prepare in their workplaces in the future. With regard to students who are ready to leave the school, they should be advised about the sustainability of the career path they are choosing. This is important to guide them what job they should work and vice versa. For example, these days, more and more apps appear for teaching purposes, like ChatGPT, which is supported by Al technology, to help people with all of the information. It may replace the teacher in the future. Therefore, students have to find out and consider the job they would work. Besides that, people need to keep up with the developing world full of technology, by learning the use of technology.
To conclude, to follow the rapidly alteration of the world, people need to prepare to face with this change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...d by Al technology, to help people with all of the information. It may replace the teacher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02711864407 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6348383027 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4713333847 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2352941176 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271984555815 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778795299596 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665790327872 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170846736701 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708163364617 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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