Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Are disadvantages of this requirement greater than the benefits for the community and individuals?
In today's work, some people think that young people should participate in voluntary work to bring benefits to themselves and society. In my opinion, I believe that the advantages would outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, when young adults take part in unpaid work, it can affect their life and finances. For example, they will have difficulty when they do not have enough money to pay for their life. Living expenses such as accommodation or food can depend on their parents and cause financial pressure. In addition, a lot of companies and organizations in many countries could not obtain adequate professional employees. The economy will stagnate, and will have bad consequences for those who do business. Human resources can reduce the number of workers such as medicine and technology.
On the other hand, although there are drawbacks when young people take part in community work voluntarily, the benefits provided are significant. First, they have an influence to make new relationships, make new friends and easily communicate with others. Their ability to work in groups would improve, and they would have a lot of experience to solve the problem quickly. Second, many homeless people or unemployed people will get more help. Because there will be charities established such as distributing charity rice, blood donation, and charity medical examination. More and more people will get financial assistance and life will be less miserable.
To sum up, although young adults getting work with no salary cause general disadvantages, but the advantages it brings about are more outstanding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34117647059 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88554978113 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7612195721 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.8 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2448777883 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078886233497 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10481288726 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151920115142 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100889412023 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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