The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Why is it the case? Can you suggest some ways to prepare people to work in the future?
Careers are changing and evolving today to meet modern society's demands. Moreover, the position and roles of jobs are also undergoing changes to adapt to more modern ways of working and living. From my perspective, this is the result of globalization and automation advances. In this essay I will discuss the more specific reason and suggest some ways to better prepare to have a good life in the future
First of all, technology and artificial intelligence are making the production method easier. Furthermore, millions of people around the world are losing their jobs and being replaced by automatic machines. For instance, millions of factory workers for Twitter have been fired because of machines which do jobs faster and more effectively. It is also due to the ever-increasing desire to cut expenses, many workers are hired to outsource to countries where wages are lower. For example, when a business wants to produce a hard product, they will most likely be connected to someone in third countries, like China, Vietnam where wages are lower.
However, there are many ways to control these changes in the future. First of all, students preparing for high school graduation need to be advised about jobs which are suitable for their abilities. Secondly, people will need to keep up to date with the technologies available now to understand the mechanism. Another option is that the specific courses could be designed to use modern technology. Gallery science is necessary to know the latest device.
In conclusion, although there are a number of changes in the workplace, education and keeping up to date with modern technology is the key to avoiding major problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13868613139 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74695109466 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5625563514 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183927890822 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523832908006 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531989826848 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097094226906 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673106076158 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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