Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people argued that computers will be became the most important invention in the next 100 years. I totally disagree with this statement.
First of all, computers are used very popular nowadays so that the world will need a tecnology more modern to replace to computer. It's not too hard to prove that every house at least owns one. Moreover, big company such as Unilever, P&G, P/S,etc... willing to pay hundreds billion dollars for their information systems. So it's easy to see that each employee in their company always owns private computer invested by their boss. However, with the development of technology immediately , the leading company also need something which more benefits but smaller than the computer such as ipad, tab or iwatch.
Secondly, the hundred years is a long period time. Nowadays, the experts is researching glass-smart, headphone smart.Therefore , we cannot ensure that computers are still important in life in the last 100 years. For example, the iwatches not only are used popular but also can connect with the phones and other devices . They are more usefull than computers.
With the development of technology ,nowadays the market have more and more products which can replace the computers .Hence, that's not sure for computers are still important innovation in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ogy more modern to replace to computer. Its not too hard to prove that every house ...
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Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
..., big company such as Unilever, P&G, P/S,etc... willing to pay hundreds billion doll...
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Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...P&G, P/S,etc... willing to pay hundreds billion dollars for their information systems. ...
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Line 2, column 483, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he development of technology immediately , the leading company also need something...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...esearching glass-smart, headphone smart.Therefore , we cannot ensure that computers are s...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...g glass-smart, headphone smart.Therefore , we cannot ensure that computers are sti...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ast 100 years. For example, the iwatches not only are used popular but also can c...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...onnect with the phones and other devices . They are more usefull than computers. ...
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Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ers. With the development of technology ,nowadays the market have more and more p...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...products which can replace the computers .Hence, thats not sure for computers are ...
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...oducts which can replace the computers .Hence, thats not sure for computers are still...
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Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...which can replace the computers .Hence, thats not sure for computers are still import...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, at least, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20379146919 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65115989527 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644549763033 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.620715075 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4615384615 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170425513896 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616611806284 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654742648507 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131147943698 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900553491755 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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