Write an essay about the advantages and disadvantages of consuming genetically enhanced food.
Today, genetically enhanced food are allowed to be sold to anybody in any grocery in American. However, should we consume this kind of food is a controversial topic. Some said yes because of its benefits; some disagree because it does harm to human and environment.
First, genetically enhanced food brings some benefits to human. According to Source 2, it increases the output, improved the nutritional content and provides enough food to the world’s grow population. Genetically enhanced crops are safe, resist disease better. Moreover, companies can manipulate seeds to withstand some of nature’s predators and uncontrollable weather patterns such as drought tolerance or monsoons.
In the other hand, genetically enhanced food also causes many risks. Source 2 concern that the rise in many diseases may be associated with GM foods. Also, one immediate health concern with eating genetically modified foods is allergens. In 2000, several people reported several allergic reactions because of eating modified food which contains a protein in animal feed. Moreover, scientists worry that farmers will increase the use of herbicides and poison due to most GMO seeds are engineered to be immune to herbicides and resistant to insect and disease.
In conclude, genetically enhanced foods aren’t safe but it still has many benefits. Choosing to eat or not depends on each body.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48837209302 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92641316235 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66511627907 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3245127253 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2857142857 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214830208841 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084836097278 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779319542448 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13765678939 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150218694055 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.97 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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