Write sentences to answer the questions about a teacher Who was your favorite teacher in school What did that person teach What did you like best about him or her Tell us about something you learned from him or her

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Write sentences to answer the questions: about a teacher
Who was your favorite teacher in school? What did that person teach?
What did you like best about him or her?
Tell us about something you learned from him or her.

I am a student of university so I need to learnt a great deal of subject with some different teacher. Actually, I learnt accounting and auditing so I am pretty kind on my Financial Accounting teacher because I meet and work with her more than the other teachers.
Her name is Thu. She is very enthusiastic and helpful so that we are always call her is mom. She quite adorable when she smile. Ms.Thu is always support and instruction her student. She is not only erudition at Financial but also at English. When I need to do "Accumulated Awareness Internship Report" by English, I was very surprised with her skill because at her age not many people can speak English fluently. She checked my grammar, my sentences, vocabulary, so on. She didn't have lunch to help me complete my report perfect. I am proud of when I can study with Ms. Thu. She gave me a lot of knowledge.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to account'.
Suggestion: to account
...e different teacher. Actually, I learnt accounting and auditing so I am pretty kind on my ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'called'.
Suggestion: called
...astic and helpful so that we are always call her is mom. She quite adorable when she...
^^^^
Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'smiles'.
Suggestion: smiles
...her is mom. She quite adorable when she smile. Ms.Thu is always support and instructi...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thu
.... She quite adorable when she smile. Ms.Thu is always support and instruction her s...
^^^
Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ness Internship Report' by English, I was very surprised with her skill beca...
^^
Line 2, column 485, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...r, my sentences, vocabulary, so on. She didnt have lunch to help me complete my repor...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55974842767 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88736103799 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7108104588 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4166666667 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.25 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0762321584359 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304673200008 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325570272157 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624659054315 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00465087321314 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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