One major achievement for most people is to be success. Moreover, this essay will identify difference argument from people related success meaning and I will come with my own meaning to conclude.
Relating people's views, it is often said that success is day-to-day altering to be better. To explain, people will have been categorized as a success person if they have already presented a change to be better person as the time changes. Furthermore, it is widely known that a success person is a rich person. This is because many people assume that money is an orientation to measure a success, thus those who have a lot of money will live easily and have an availability to participate in many conducts. Finally, another agreement related to success is that those who gain happiness are a success person. This means that as long as people sense happy with their life, they do not need to find a lot of money or to be better for tomorrow.
Turning to my own view, a great success is when we have already reached not only our desire but also what we need. Firstly, I will get satisfaction if my desire has been achieved completely, meaning that in this terms, I have already achieve my success also. Secondly, I am convinced that in some terms, I do not recognize what I need, so that I feel to become success when I recognize that my necessity has been come true.
In conclusion, it is true that a good change, welfare and having a lot of money can utilize for measuring person’s success. However, I feel strongly that success meaning come from necessity and willingness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...en achieved completely, meaning that in this terms, I have already achieve my succes...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
...ning that in this terms, I have already achieve my success also. Secondly, I am convinc...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...erms, I have already achieve my success also. Secondly, I am convinced that in some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69064748201 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66933621532 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510791366906 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9685325955 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242749943766 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106480194093 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374402450217 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166042622826 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409404065296 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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