You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks.
Which country would you like to visit?
Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
You should write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
I choose the united kingdom because the united kingdom's history is really so long and the democracy it's different.
For example, united kingdom history formally almost start in 1707 but the place is a much longer them. In that point best example for this Stonehenge.
People are thought to have been made b.c 2200 and b.c 2400. In my opinion, Stonehenge is the best historical artifact in the united kingdom reason for this Stonehenge made in 2-3 tons of stone and even before that Egyptian pyramids.
That time people have used that simple physics, maths, and geography too and that was really exciting. United kingdom also has legends, for example, King Arthur legends and there are too many movies and series about them. Their democracy looks different than other countries. They have a council also a president too but they have also for view royal and they working together for the country.
The United Kingdom consists of more than one country and it can be hard to control for a different country but the united kingdom continues peacefully for a long time.
United kingdom last hundred years are not clear for other countries in early 1800 united kingdom try to slaves African and more pleasant too and they are coming to first on the list about slaves program this part also not my favorite part too but you can't escape to the reality after that maybe they are trying to change too much but we can't back to time.
United kingdom they do not have too much traditional food like other countries but I really want to try every traditional food possible because you can found too many things about the country. Of course, this is my opinion.
To sum up the United kingdom mostly a historic place but if you want you can find some traditional food too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'point the best'.
Suggestion: point the best
...he place is a much longer them. In that point best example for this Stonehenge. People a...
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Line 6, column 255, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...t them. Their democracy looks different than other countries. They have a council al...
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Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
... for a long time. United kingdom last hundred years are not clear for other countries...
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Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'slave'.
Suggestion: slave
...ies in early 1800 united kingdom try to slaves African and more pleasant too and they ...
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Line 9, column 252, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t also not my favorite part too but you cant escape to the reality after that maybe ...
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Line 9, column 338, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ey are trying to change too much but we cant back to time. United kingdom they d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, really, so, for example, of course, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74110032362 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22008831259 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495145631068 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0921704631 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136356768508 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522982212175 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370426174526 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073553704923 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330300388764 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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