You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
You should write at least 250 words.
There is question about how news editors decide what to broadcast in television or what to print in newspapers. Of course, there a variety of reasons behind the calls they make. One of which is the values that their company subscribes to. Another is the current thrust of management. Third, are the benefactors who provide financial support. Finally, the so-called human interest that sells to the public is one more factor in what news editors decide to present to the public.
Given the complexity of deciding whether bad news or good news to present, the news editors try to find the balance of the two. On the one hand, due to the nature of world today, with the amount of negative issues surfacing, primarily presenting bad news is not entirely bad, as we are always forewarned. We are given a chance to gear up and prevent untoward incidents. Knowing what to expect and how to protect ourselves is a matter of ensuring our survival. This is where the importance of the news editors’ role in bringing the bad news to the fore lie. On the other hand, being exposed constantly to the bad news may bring about a negative effect on people. Nowadays, people are stressed and look for ways to improve their feelings of negativity brought about by the pandemic that has stifled every person, society and nation worldwide. Hearing and reading only about the bad news that we are already very much aware of, only heightens the stress and threatens our mental health. If television and newspapers only present the bad news, people will inevitably avoid watching the news or even reading newspapers. As are result, the television networks and print media will be forced to downsize and lay off people, or even shut down completely. This then, could lead to more mental health issues among the people, thereby threatening society’s existence all the more. With this being the case, it would be better to present the good news over the bad news, wouldn’t it?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, may, so, then, third, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82789317507 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48740100319 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554896142433 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2491829978 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215352789619 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683214268421 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871616232088 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192132253374 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042390564098 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.