You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Hosting a major sporting event such as the Olympics or the football World Cup offers significant benefits to the country concerned, yet the costs involved can be excessive and may divert funds from other important areas.
What are the benefits of being a host, and do these outweigh the financial implications?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Organising an international sporting event like the Olympics or the football World Cup can bring several benefits for the country concerned. However, the expenses for the event can be excessive and the government will not have enough budget for other essential areas. In my opinion, the benefits of hosting a sporting event can outweight its financial drawbacks.
There are two main financial disadvantages. First, hosting nation have to spend an enormous amount of money for reinforcing the infrastructure or facilities such as stadium and traffic system but they will not be used frequently after the event. For example, Dubai government spent billions US dollar on constructing a new stadium for the football World Cup 2022, althought they donot have clearly usage plan for the stadium. Second, spending too much money for instructure and facilities mentioned above squanders budget can cause the budget shortage for other important areas like education or healthcare system.
On the other hands, major sporting events bring various benefits for hosting country. The event can attract lots of visitors for country where it is organised, therefore, tourism and retail trade of that nation can be promoted, even this can stimulate its ecomomy. For instance, some foreigners will stay in the hosting country for a few weeks after the event to tour and explore more about that country, so revenue of tourist companies can increase then. Moreover, if country can well done the hosting role, it can be in the limelight and enhance its image “in the eyes of international friends”.
In conclusion, despite of some disadvantages on financial sector, organising an internatinal event brings various benefits, not only on economy but also on diplomacy for hosting nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33571428571 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80024598045 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578571428571 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1574385624 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222731978962 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101175308144 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635147601934 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145378112416 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848448037693 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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