You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Many people believe that the news media have become influential on people's lives. However, this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
With the unprecedented boom of technology, people are entitled to access myriad of its applications including news media. Some people believe that news media has detrimental influence on people's lives; however, I l think that it is likely to bring many benefits for humanity.
The regular use of news media is supposed to engender benefits for both individuals and societies. When it comes to individuals, it is possible for them to keep abreast of latest information around the world, which means they are able to gain manifold kinds of knowledge without travelling to other countries. As a result, they can probably broaden their minds and save time as well expenses simultaneously, especially for indigent people. In terms of societies, news media can bridge the countries in the world for the common wealth. Specifically, the authorities can get hold of the situation of other countries without having a visit in person, therefore, they can evaluate issues objectively and avoid impetuous decisions which possibly cause them a lot of trouble after that. Moreover, thanks to this kind of media, countries can find the most beneficial strategies for the development of countries.
However, there are people who boycott the use of news media with the pretext that it can affect people adversely. They excuses that news media can mislead people and direct them to the viewpoint that authors want. In fact, this perspective is somehow fallacious. Articles expected to published are likely to be verified prudently beforehand and people nowadays are educated enough to check the authentification of information that they access. Therefore, news media is encouraged these days to arm people with necessary knowledge so they can get updates of nascent events around the world.
In conclusion, the existence of news media is not deleterious to people's lives but people can benefit significantly from it. It not only brings people huge amount of knowledge but also connects countries together to resolve problems and accelerate development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...it is possible for them to keep abreast of latest information around the world, which mea...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'excuse'
Suggestion: excuse
...at it can affect people adversely. They excuses that news media can mislead people and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33436532508 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9256228798 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572755417957 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9508490043 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.866666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185487402976 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771615165649 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548123229598 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138473999458 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483462926705 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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