You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Nowadays in some countries, people's awareness of the history of the house is becoming common. This trend has its own things in common and in this essay I will point to some of them and give an idea of what can be done with being able to learn and spread information about buildings. . . and the house that everyone wants to know. To begin with, I must admit that this opinion is personal and many people may disagree with this view. As for what worries me, interest in learning the history of a house or building a weed, when I consider developing countries or countries going through wars or other situations. difficult political situation, there is no such thing as interest in understanding the foundation of the building. . . For example, I can introduce my country,. Here most of the population is trying to survive rather than being concerned with the cultural or historical background of the place. Furthermore, the question is what should people do to find or find the necessary information that I have an idea that can turn into a good startup business plan. However, said easily than done. As we all know, there are many unblocking services on the market today. I think with the help of some experts like archivists, historians, historians and certainly project managers, we should be able to help people or families with data. accurate about the history of the houses and buildings. Since many people do not have the skills and knowledge to do this work on their own, this type of online instruction service will equally benefit both students and loved ones. . In short, as mentioned above, the alternating shapes on the background of a building or house is a state with its own aesthetic value. But if a mind is concerned with basic human needs to live there is nowhere to search for your own truth through your history. However, finding and investigating is not very simple it can be achieved by taking the pegs first.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, as for, for example, i think, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77014925373 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66204255943 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570149253731 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2875468704 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237769056117 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069002555425 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594801815823 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237769056117 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.