You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
NOWADAYS PEOPLE AND THEIR EFFORTS ARE RESPECTED AND VALUED IN SOCIETY. SOME NATIONS PROVIDE HIGH WAGES TO THEIR EMPLOYEE WHICH BECOME A QUESTION OF DEBATE IN TODAY'S WORLD. HOWEVER, OTHER BELIEVE THAT GOVERNMENT SHOULD NOT ALLOW AN ORGANIZATION TO OFFER SUCH AN ESCALATED RATE. I COMPLETELY CONSENT WITH THE FORMER VIEW AND BOTH THE VIEWS WILL BE ANALYSED IN THE SUBSEQUENT PARAGRAPH.
TO COMMENCE, THERE ARE UMPTEEN REASONS WHY HIGHER SALARIES SHOULD BE PROVIDED. FIRSTLY, EDUCATION AND EXPERIENCE PLAYS A KEY ROLE IN DESINGNATION AND FINANCIAL BUDGET OF AN INDIVIDUAL AS IT WOULD IMPACT COMPANY ECONOMICALLY WHICH MUST BE CONSIDERED. MOREOVER, SOME SKILLED AND TALENTED PEOPLE NEVER NEED TO BE CERTIFY FOR THEIR POTENTIAL TO WORK AND THIS SHOULD BE APPRAISED. FOR INSTANCE, THE COMPANY I AM WORKING HIGHER AND OFFER HIGHER PACKAGE THAN IMAGINATION FOR SKILLED PEOPLE AND NOT URGE FOR CRTIFICATION. THERE ARE CERTAINLY FEW PEOPLE WHO CAN ACHIEVE THIS FAME.
ON THE FLIP SIDE, THERE ARE PEOPLE WHO BELIEVE AUTHORIZATION NEED TO PUT BOUND AT SOME LEVEL TO STOP PEOPLE TO GET MORE INDULDGE. PREDOMINANTLY, IT CAN GENERATE INFERIORITY COMPLEX AMONG THOSE WHO NEVER REACH TO THIS LEVEL EVEN THOUGH HAVING A VALID DEGREE. THIS MAY LEAD THEM TO THE NEGATIVE DIRECTIONS AND CAN CREATE A MAJOR ISSUE FOR SOCIETY. ROBBERY AND MURDERED IN JEALOUSY IS NOT KNEW TO CONSIDER IN SOCIETY AND IT CAN IMPACT ON UPCOMING GENERATION.
TO CONCLUDE, PEOPLE ALWAYS WANT TO HIRE NON CERTIFIED STRATEGIC PERSON OVER THE CERTIFIED AND NON-MANAGERIAL ONES.
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- No one can deny the power of media in the present world It holds a notorious image too with its attempts to intrude in the private lives of celebrities Why do they need to do so and is it fair on their part 89
- Many countries are still facing problems regarding a huge population To control the ever increasing population many people believe that Government can control the population through taxes To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 74
- In recent years there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities What has caused this What solution can you suggest 38
- People s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
NOW A DAYS PEOPLE AND THEIR EFFORTS ARE RESPECTED ...
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Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...NCE PLAYS A KEY ROLE IN DESINGNATION AND FINANCIAL BUDGET OF AN INDIVIDUAL AS IT ...
^^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: Known
...ROBBERY AND MURDERED IN JEALOUSY IS NOT KNEW TO CONSIDER IN SOCIETY AND IT CAN IMPAC...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11553784861 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77646083747 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3584922313 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.7142857143 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217561472334 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692675729642 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513879821709 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11080617322 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475756670234 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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