You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not in others.
Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding.
Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Some people believe that certain subjects in the modern world require specialists in them as those topics have become relevant for everyone. So, the government should make free education policy for the learners who are interested in those specefic subjects . However, people who want to study the less necessary subjects need to pay for their degree.
An educational policy similar to the above passage is certainly disadvantatious to the society and to the world. This eassy elaborates the reasoning behind it.
Education is a basic right to all human. If government of a certain country wants to make this right available to all the citizen, they can simply need to introduce a cost-free education. But in most developing countries, students still pay a hefty price for their certificates. Now, imagine a society where only some studies are made free. Then most student will be like to be motivated to study that specific subject. And that particular society will only have specific careers like doctors, engineers or architects and all other occupation will cease to exist.
On the other hand, the modern world is becoming more relied on mechines. In the past, bakers used to hand-bake their products to sell. But now most baking industry has mechines and robots that do the baking job; though such mechines need a regular manual checkup. So, now we need student who study mechanics and bakery as well. As mechines are also used in other sectors and if only mechanics is made a cost-free subject then everyone will be a mechanics-student and none will study bakery which will ultimately lead a world without bakers and baking specialist and where all the knowledge about baking is found on history books.
To conclude, if we do not want the scenerio in the last passage to come true, we must make all type of subject available to the eager learners and see how well that works out for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'want'?
Suggestion: want
...man. If government of a certain country wants to make this right available to all the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a cost-free subject then everyone will be a mechanics-student and none will stu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94704049844 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62543431956 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532710280374 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2340153321 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4117647059 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25073239343 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780205410279 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575742400889 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128494655555 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903976949539 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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