You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
In contemporary era,interesting any kind of sport is vital for remain healthy.According to ability and interest there is many kind of different sport options.It's could be team games like a basketball,football or baseball.And also it's could be individual games like a swimming or tennis.Both kind of sports have a many various benefits and disadvantages.
Initially,many people believe that playing or establish game with others should be more positive sides rather than single games.First of all,in team sports each person should have to learn cohesion during game with the others.Each person in game have to listen to others for be successful.And also,team players are have to be indulgent to others.With this way their friendship are developing and they learn play together compatible.However,still this games also have negative sides.In the team games players can not be able to take risk or decision with by selfs.They should discuss with others before take an action.This attitude can be effect to their personel life as a bad ways.
On the other hands,some part of people support the individuals game rather than team games.According to this type of person in single games are much efficient to be learn how to achieve something in real life.Because in this games player have to play single and all responsibility depend on themselves.Apart from this positive side also single games have negative side.For example,in this sports players cannot be able to learn have to play together with other in peacefull and cohesion.
Eventually,according to my opinion both kind of sports have positive and negative sides.However, choosing a sport branch according to single or team is not correct.Each one can be assist to boost personal life.The important point is be gentle and hardworking in all kind of sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, apart from, for example, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33797909408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47405805747 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.611229928 49.4020404114 309% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 383.0 106.682146367 359% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.75 20.7667163134 346% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.5 7.06120827912 361% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165244377774 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108431177524 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284230632622 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108431177524 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284230632622 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.6 13.0946893788 302% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 50.2224549098 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.88 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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