Here is my writing task 2
With the advancement in medical field it has been seen that many childhood diseases can be cured through the use of vaccines. There is a notion that parents must be obliged to do vaccination of their children while others feel that there should be voluntary decision of a parent. This essay will discuss its benefits and drawbacks with feasible conclusion.
Vaccination should be mandatory because if children are vaccinated then major diseases can be eradicated at the early age. This will not only protect them from detrimental effects they will face but also upbring them with physicaland mental growth. For instance it is revealed by health organisation in India the percentage of polio disease declined at high rate on dint of vaccinations. Moreover, parents are not awared about its importance for their juveniles. Through its legislation they considered it as their priority and also came to know which vaccination is necessary for thier age. Furthermore, the biggest advantage of this is that it also protect the child from disease while travelling to disease prone countries for example BCG vaccination is necessary if a person is travelling to developing nations like India.
While vaccinations has cons too. First concern is that these vaccination has side effects too which has hazardous impact on the health of kid such as high fever, vomiting, loose motions, unconscious etcetera. Second shortcoming is that some immunizations are not recovered by government especially in developing nations which is not affordable by everyone. It sometimes disturb their budget so this decision should be leave on individuals whether they want to opt it or not.
In conclusion, vaccination played a vital role in the upbringing of child so parents should not ignore its importance and try to vaccinate their child at appropriate age and time and give them a healthy future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 827, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lling to developing nations like India. While vaccinations has cons too. First conce...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... While vaccinations has cons too. First concern is that these vaccination has si...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this vaccination' or 'these vaccinations'?
Suggestion: this vaccination; these vaccinations
...ns has cons too. First concern is that these vaccination has side effects too which has hazardou...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e effects too which has hazardous impact on the health of kid such as high fever,...
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Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'disturbs'?
Suggestion: disturbs
...ot affordable by everyone. It sometimes disturb their budget so this decision should be...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leaved', 'left'?
Suggestion: leaved; left
...their budget so this decision should be leave on individuals whether they want to op...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... decision should be leave on individuals whether they want to opt it or not. In ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18831168831 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90349066705 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574675324675 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.02220405 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202331659257 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713621788706 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755945508924 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113292780026 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952785742197 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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