You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology has been positive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience you might have to support your answer.
Write at least 250 words.
The Internet has brought exponential changes to our lives in recent years. While some people argue that it has negative impacts on our lives and society. I personally believe that it has actually turned our world a much better place. In my point of view, there are two main benefits from this technology.
First of all, it is an indisputable that the Internet has improved the way we communicate. Despite of causing social isolation- a problem resulted in people who spend too much time using Internet instead of relating to the real world. Most of us have greatly benefited from e-mail or internet chat program like i-Messenger. These incredibly useful tools of communication made it easier, cheaper and faster to contact with our loved ones and customers, suppliers in faraway places.
Second, the Internet contains a vast amount of materials which provide us with all kind of information can be access at a click of a button. In the past, researchers spent a lot of hours in library. Nowadays, however, the same information is available online, it help us save a lot of time. Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable and useful. Nevertheless, I feel that this free information has been beneficial to our modern life.
In conclusion, I once again restate my opinion that the Internet has positive influence in modern life because of its effectiveness on both communication and information flows.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ame information is available online, it help us save a lot of time. Admittedly, not...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...us save a lot of time. Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0460251046 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92225792731 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63179916318 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1815263444 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161358085679 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540099927779 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431076352671 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088182079214 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437705130919 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.