You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
it is believed that following local customs and behaviour is necessary for tourist visiting to other places. However, some people consider that nations should accept different cultures.
I will show my opinion in the last
In the one hand, they have reasons to expect tourists to follow their tradition. I will take relationships for example, some people from Western country think when falling in love with someone, they immediately show their feelings and what they expect, but with asian they think it is too rude and disregarded. asian usually need much time to acquaint or be close each other. To say that you love them they need to know her or him at least 3 months. they believe when say this word in that time the relationship will last longer than ever. Therefore, that is the customs the foreign need to know and get used to it or they will receive the cold refusal. In the future, if visitors are flexible in each behavior, everybody will have special impression to them.
In the other hand, the countries which want to engage tourism need to sympathize and welcome particular behaviors from visitors for many benefits. First, foreigner who see the friendly and warm welcome will continue to visit their country and in the long term, countries’s economics will also increase. Secondly, integration is a crucial role of our life if we don’t want to be outdated and gradually become underdeveloping countries forever – that is the thing nobody in the citizen want# it to happen. Thirdly, all people around the world will know about you in the most beautiful images and maybe, it can help you more network friends !
In conclusion, I believe welcoming other cultures is more important. it not only brings us many benefits about money, fame but also affirms our hospitality to the world
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- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differen 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d to know her or him at least 3 months. they believe when say this word in that time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, at least, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96405228758 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62708783024 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6017421791 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235005028706 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074334272167 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584832480846 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125276537668 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835254123678 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.