You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important.
This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.
Do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
There is no doubt that these days significance of international brands and their products becoming very popular. However, the question : Are these multinational organisations are affecting our lives detrimentally? Is considered one of the most controversial issues today. In this essay, I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits considerably outweigh the disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is having a uniform standard in products will increase the reliability and consistency. Mcdonald's, for example, will guarantee having tasty fries and burgers almost everywhere. Moreover, It is also possible to say that products by multiregional companies usually bring more unique items which could not be possibly provided by national ones. One good illustration of this is Microsoft. It has got the latest of technology and products such as Windows and XBox which cannot be delivered internationally except itself.
On the other hand, it is also possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact these gigantic organisations erode national production and dominate over the market. People often have this opinion because wherever as such companies launch in a specific region, it competes with the national market aggressively with their bigger marketing budgets which eventually kill the national players.
A second point is that the local cultures get affected with the simi-uniform brand of international companies. A particularly good example here is fast food companies; they mostly reflect the american culture which directly have effects on other cultures like Asian or Arab cultures as people eventually eat of these restaurants more and more.
As we have seen, there are no easy answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that these international organisations and their products lessens our life's quality due to their economic and cultural impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... international brands and their products becoming very popular. However, the ques...
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... their economic and cultural impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in fact, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55948553055 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05625907118 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604501607717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2797902692 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.705882353 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136257358679 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406270952517 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325818691884 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800409718842 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309162609393 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.