Many adults tend to leave their villages and rural regions to have experience living in urban areas due to improve their education or work. There are some reasons for this departure and I believe that drawbacks of this act are more than advantages.
To begin with, youths are coming in cities owing to promote their future condition. In fact, in urban territories, there are numerous factories and huge companies which provide opportunities for young people to work. Actually, in countryside, most of the people are working on agricultural land and there is no popular university or enterprise. In addition, diversity of university and schools with different ranges of education are provided in cities which are an optimum idea for adults in villages to leave their habitat and trying to enter to one of these educational system.
On the other hand, it appears that majority of younger people have leaved their villages to live in cities recently that this event would have some negative consequences. For instant, when rate of population in urban areas is rising, we should expect that traffic congestion and contamination will be increased. Furthermore, rate of unemployment will be raised because many adults are graduated annually to find careers then by adding young population of rural region, this might be impossible for all of them to find jobs. For illustration, in some cities of India, there are mixture of rural and urban people who suffer from poverty and unemployment that is out of control.
In conclusion, according to the passage, I believe that cities have many advantages for adults to develop their skills and education. In this case, they prefer to be in cities rather than villages but this deed may have some problems that it would be predicted and there should be some practical solutions to carry out.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, may, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0761589404 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72858330982 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529801324503 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.8298467899 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253534158421 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964599635551 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409542200577 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160506041813 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334461521402 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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