Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age. This is called “peer pressure”. Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantage
Friends with the same age can be the main contributor in the changes of demeanor of several juveniles nowadays. This essay will argue that the advantages of this development are eclipsed by the disadvantages involved.
It is undeniable that peer pressure can be advantageous to a certain extent, in terms of reinforcing positive habits and attitudes of youngsters in social and scholastic terms. There is a tendency for the students to take their classmates, who have a close intimacy, as a role model. As a result, if peers set a good model to their counterparts, they can achieve improvement in both academic and social aspects. Take the Road to Mount Olympia show as an example, when young people watch others with the same age, this may encourage them to promote their desire to be goal-oriented and fulfill their dreams of intellectual accomplishment.
The drawbacks brought about by being influenced by those who are in the same age group, nevertheless, could far outweigh the aforementioned benefits. Perhaps one of these is the mental issues of many young students. This is because stress or pressure originated from the comparison among the children, this would make the children fear of expressing themselves in public or they are potentially socially-distanced from their friends or families. More seriously, this can be an alarming issue as the worst consequence that may follow is suicide. Japan, for example, witnessed the dramatic increase in the number of young suicide, at 70% men aged from 22 to 44 in 2009.
In conclusion, peer pressure can offer several benefits. However, this phenomenon can produce some negative impacts which are of greater significance
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19117647059 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08549423172 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9188032429 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303781726055 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918913595806 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537711259828 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167143426544 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395874873199 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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