Now-a-days, it is very essential for every parent to put there child in the environment of peer group. Some people think its necessary while some think its a negative point. Let us discuss about the same.
Colleges have started giving group projects to their students, new invention can be made with the help of new ideas, gather more knowledge and information. Every person try to compete with other person in one or the another way resulting in good academic performance.
On the other side, it has some negative effects. Some spoiled and arrogant children will encourage the simple ones to learn wrong things. In extreme cases , these problems can forced children to adopt wrong habits and indulge in it.
These problems can be monitored and can be reduced if parents keep a keen watch on there children. Their psychology and behaviour will tell parents about the wrongdoings. It should be a duty of the mother and the father to discuss problems like a friend with kids by timely interfering in the necessary matters so that they don't go offtrack.
In my opinion, peer group benefits are more than its disadvantages. Hence, it is necessary to guide
their child about the good things and the bad so that they can learn only the best qualities of there friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...le think its necessary while some think its a negative point. Let us discuss about ...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...iving group projects to their students, new invention can be made with the help of new ideas,...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to wrong'
Suggestion: to wrong
...will encourage the simple ones to learn wrong things. In extreme cases , these proble...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to learn wrong things. In extreme cases , these problems can forced children to a...
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Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...g in the necessary matters so that they dont go offtrack. In my opinion, peer gr...
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Line 10, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n learn only the best qualities of there friends.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90783410138 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53053484441 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608294930876 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6096336378 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9230769231 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0635314367153 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259578535693 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022385541613 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0319786155063 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112779097644 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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