Now-a-days, every country around the world has a problem of increasing amount of wastage. Theae wastage in any form effect the ecosystem of the environment. If government and people don't try to solve this problem, it would highly effect in the future.
There are many reasons of producing increasing amount of rubbish. Increase in the population has created a problem than in the past. Nature can absorb many natural things like food, vegetables, dead body etc. and it's a natural phenomena. Thing like plastic is hazardous for nature and cannot be absorbed easily, it has more and more unnatural elements.
Secondly, the new generation has changed the habit of people for using old stuffs. Old people use to store things as it could be used anytime like plastic pipes, walkman etc. Now they are been thrown and new things are purchased rather than reusing them.
In my opinion, government should make people and children understand about the waste things and how it can be decomposed. Educational camping should be done in mall, school and college for the same to guide them to seperate re-used things like bottle etc.
To sum up, its a duty of both individual and the government to take action by ensuring everyone to use paper bags rather plastic bags and force to deal in paper manufacturing. This could help in less pollution and wastage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e environment. If government and people dont try to solve this problem, it would hig...
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Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... to solve this problem, it would highly effect in the future. There are many reason...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...easons of producing increasing amount of rubbish. Increase in the population has ...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ke food, vegetables, dead body etc. and its a natural phenomena. Thing like plastic...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'phenomenon'?
Suggestion: phenomenon
...ables, dead body etc. and its a natural phenomena. Thing like plastic is hazardous for na...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or nature and cannot be absorbed easily, it has more and more unnatural elements....
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...people for using old stuffs. Old people use to store things as it could be used any...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...d things like bottle etc. To sum up, its a duty of both individual and the gover...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96052631579 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54202520063 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1734748544 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106813952814 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390224422901 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537473599857 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053419751694 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413051021114 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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