Young people in disturbed economies tend to believe violent causing destruction to life and property. What are the causes, impact and ramedies of such problem.
The money is very important for survival on the earth. It is undoubtedly the case is that the money make the young people to voilent and also explain the causes, impact and suitable solution? In this essay, I will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the proactive measurs that authorities could implement to reduce the voilentence of younger.
The first step is to understand why is this happening? Broadly speaking, there are two main reason for this. The first but not least is the unemployment. The unemployment is very important reason the younger people are do voilent because they have not work for fulfill their needs and deeds. Apart from this, the young people are free they not have job. Moving ahead, the second main reason behind the younger people become voilent having more desires but they have not enough money to achieve those desires so that's also a big reason. As well as, the people desires are never end they are unlimited.
The trend could have many determental effects. Firstly, if the unemployment is in under the younger they go for crime such as : they snaching the chains and sometime they kill the anyone for just the money. On the other hand, for fulfillment of their desires the relation with there parents are always not good because they pressurised to them for buying the new and expensive things just for their show off.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem gives, the complexity of this causes. However, one option has to do counselling and also genral public awareness of the younger people. It all would be possible with the help of government because it are all in hand off government. The government should generate the employment so the younger people fulfill there needs.
In conclusion, there are varity of different factors that have led to make this problem worse. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this, it could probably solved by the government because are laws and country decision in hand of government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, apart from, as to, broadly speaking, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86206896552 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45962128505 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511494252874 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7119943523 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0526315789 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0740087706688 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276724213152 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404492711251 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445963003289 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235658962028 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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