Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation Why is this case What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people

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...ntemporary world compared with the past.I believe that this trend might be caused...
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...well as their creativity. To start with,at present young people are gaining power ...
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...e are gaining power for various reasons.First,those are studying in the most prestigi...
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... gaining power for various reasons.First,those are studying in the most prestigious un...
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... all around the world teaching students.In this universities they are not only lea...
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...l around the world teaching students.In this universities they are not only learning...
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...sult they are becoming more intelligent.To illustrate among the students that enro...
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...versity 28 are British prime ministers,at least 30 international leaders,55 of th...
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...ze winners and 120 Olympic game winners.Second,young generations are fairly creative t...
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...ons are fairly creative than old people.Currently they are working on new ideas and proje...
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... to make the world better place to live.For instance,those are inventing new eco-fr...
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... world better place to live.For instance,those are inventing new eco-friendly transpor...
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...ip between senior people and youngsters.This can lead to generation gap.This means t...
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...ngsters.This can lead to generation gap.This means that older people mostly out of d...
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...t older people mostly out of dated views,and they are prone to have conflicts and di...
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... conflicts and disagreements with youth.Yound people are likely to despise and resist...
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...iences afterwards. By way of conclusion,young people have more strength and influence...
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... people have more strength and influence due to their intelligence and creativity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nonetheless, second, so, well, at least, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03448275862 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.12728515596 2.80592935109 147% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698275862069 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 311.335329669 49.4020404114 630% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 350.0 106.682146367 328% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.0 20.7667163134 279% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 7.06120827912 439% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272639687502 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163569835109 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680395775117 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143127734412 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696482949638 0.056905535591 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 13.0946893788 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.31 50.2224549098 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.58 12.4159519038 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.57 8.58950901804 146% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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