Young people spend their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effects on young people and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Now a days, youngsters prefer to visit shopping malls when they are free. It is believed by many that this is harmful for both an individual and society. I completely agree that although everyone has the freedom to spend their leisure time as they like, spending free time in shopping malls is detrimental to a person as well as society.
From an individual’s perspective, firstly, it is a wastage of both time and money if young people spend their free time in shopping malls. This is because they can use their time constructively if they play their favourite sport or go to a music class in their free time which will also be good for their health. It is not unusual for anyone to be tempted to buy an attractive dress or a pair of jeans which they may already have. Secondly, a leisure walk is more exhausting due to which the younger generation tends to eat junk food, such as pizza or hamburger which is bad for their health.
Since young people are the future of a nation, productivity of society will be lost, if youngsters do not utilise their free time wisely and if they are sick or unhealthy, which will further put burden on health care system of that society. This is evident in Sydney Australia, where a higher percentage of younger people visit their free time in shopping malls and tend to splash money on munching chips and fast foods. As a result, they suffer from obesity and diabetes putting a stress on health care system.
In conclusion, in my view, youngster make use of their leisure time of course for recreation, but not in shopping malls which has a bad impact on them as well as society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, youngsters prefer to visit shopping ma...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, youngsters prefer to visit shopping ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, of course, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59246575342 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56185214522 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510273972603 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2005509611 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.909090909 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316740174992 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127647327382 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106129430509 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196574369028 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055008019802 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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