"Young people who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"
It is widely acknowledged that the number of juvenile people who are charged with crimes should be punished with the identical method as a mature. In this essay, I will elaborate on the reasons, and then treatment for the young offender could be lenient, the drawbacks of these cases should be taken into consideration.
On the one hand, there are many myriad reasons why young people are accused of crimes that would be advantageous, the most significant of which are petty crimes and traffic violations. With regard to the former, many young people under-age who tend to drive motorbikes in the inner city are considered petty crimes. Especially, young people want to prove to their peers that youngsters who are underage can be controlled by their vehicles as mature without a driving license. As well as this, the excessive situation of traffic violations is witnessed in many cities. Take for example Ho Chi Minh City, where massive vehicles are used by youngsters day by day, which accidentally runs the red light due to the fact that their behavior is an unintentional situation, which is viewed as petty crimes could be lenient.
On the other hand, some measures should not be underestimated to alleviate this problem, associated with murder and sexual assault should not be underestimated. When it comes to murder, young people who are charged with killing one person will be imprisoned as adults in order to have a good sense of responsibility for their actions, if the youngster violates a serious situation, they will get capital punishment for their evil. As far as sexual assault levels are concerned, the development of advanced technology making more and more young people corrupted by access to the dark web. As the result, the rate of sexual assault is increasing significantly stems from youngsters. All of the aforementioned approaches can be treated as mature who had a criminal offense.
In conclusion, I am inclined to believe that petty crimes and traffic violations can be lenient for first-time offenders with wrongdoings, while the serious crimes that aforementioned approaches should not be underestimated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14942528736 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97809858996 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2441595082 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.846153846 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251912015476 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09500696444 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515468655935 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165347706138 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245197722781 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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