One of the most noticeable trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that young individuals who commit crime must be treated in same way as adults by higher authorities. This apprehension seems to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate in following paragraphs.
To begin with, there is a deluge of arguments in favour of that the higher authorities must punished young ones who commit crime in same way as adults. The most preponderant one is that it spreads awareness and decrease crime rate. To elaborate it, when young ones commit crime they know that after a certain period of time they will be released from jail. If they are charged by same punishment as adults them their are less chances that they commit crime. It cannot only contribute to decrease the crime rate but also leads to numerous other benefits. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers masses can enhance the quality and productivity of their lives with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand in one good stead as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of aforementioned propositions is that it is only likely to help in one excel and thrive in varied areas. Besides, less chances of serious crime. To explain it, in previous times there are some small level crimes committed by young ones and when they set free after a certain period of time they committed big crime such as felony. For instance the study results published by the government of Australia between March 2014 and April 2016 clearly indicates that in order to maintain peace in society the government must punish young ones in same way as adults and it is crucial and critical for the security measurement of the society.
On the other hand a section of society contradicts above-mentioned views by providing reliable justifications. The primary one's lies in the fact that their cognitive abilities. To make it justifiable, whenever young people commit any crime they are not fully aware about any aspect of situation. They do not know what the circumstances will be after committing a crime. Instead giving strict punishments like adults they must be educate about the sewer problems after committing any crime. Hence it is apparent that why many people consider it as a negative development.
To conclude, having pondered over above stated despite having some drawbacks the potential benefits of giving punishment to young individuals by the government who commit crimes are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04377880184 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74196743195 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523041474654 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1784061794 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.238095238 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372371143481 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11030362086 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102942329223 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222499138433 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458572311235 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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