From your own understanding and experience, what are the two significant factors that enable students to get a well-paid job in the future?
When it comes to finding a highly-paid position, many sets of skills are essential for students to get a higher chance of being hired. In my school of thought, in-depth knowledge in a chosen field and good language ability is the most fundamental skills in helping students get offered lucrative salaries in ther future.
It is imperative to cultivate as much knowledge and insights as possible if students want to get into the realm of a highly-earning level. Since recruiters often look for and are willing to pay for knowledgeable and filled-with-insights candidates who can apply hard-earned knowledge to help their businesses flourish. For example, when a marketing graduate ap for a consulting position in a well-established marketing company, he seems to lack much-needed insights about marketing and, thus, require more training before assuming the role. This candidate will likely be offered a minimum salary because the employer will have to allocate effort and time to train him. Therefore, the early cultivation of a rich source of knowledge in a chosen field is of the essence in helping students achieve their dreams of getting high-paid jobs after leaving school.
Language ability and communication skills have always played critical roles in a competitive job market environment and in elevating the career prospects of graduates. Students who speak more than one language with excellent command are more likely to be offered lucrative salaries along with many job-related perks. Thus, Students nowadays try to learn English and other popular languages essential to the existing job market by registering in many online courses to hone their language skills and better prepare themselves for future job-seeking attempts. In addition, businesses will be able to connect with more partners worldwide through effective communication, which entails a score of highly skilled employees who can speak more than one language and display problem-solving ability. Therefore, Advanced English-speaking staff are likely to be promoted to higher positions and have remarkable earnings.
In conclusion, while the skills necessary to get a high-paid job are diverse, students must proactively prepare themselves proactively with an in-depth knowledge of their chosen expertise coupled with an excellent command of foreign languages, thereby possibly receiving a lucrative salary level in the future job-seeking endeavours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...thought, in-depth knowledge in a chosen field and good language ability is the most f...
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Line 3, column 745, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
... a rich source of knowledge in a chosen field is of the essence in helping students a...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2068.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60433604336 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14277392285 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550135501355 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4610750676 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.076923077 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3846153846 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130415089821 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526145202218 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461620599073 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938941157549 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231549383069 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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