First of all, research and development is key in human evolution. We, as a specie, were able to progress from cave man to business through research and development. In addition, research can also provide our own survival, in which human being are no longer so exposed to natural catastrophes and genetic predestination. Considering the to option given, I will expose the pros and cons, if any, of these two options.
Firstly, these two research areas are very important and can be very influentially in any given country. Having a research center in agriculture can provide means for the discovery of new innovating treatments to common diseases, better food products, a mores sustainable agriculture and society and last but not least a more competitive economy. For example, biotechnology has provided ways to feed world population more efficiently than before. Moreover, plant diseases can now be fight in a more efficient way. Having a research center in business can lead a country to have more knowledge or "know-how" in the business area, and therefore have a more competitive and stronger economy, anticipate financial crisis, more jobs and more and better companies. For example the US have a long story in, not only but also, business research were they were able to win the cold war against the so called at the time Soviet Union, by business and political means. In conclusion, I think that both research centers are important for a prosperous country.
- Children today are not as fit and healthy as in the past. Discuss the causes for this situation with relevant examples and give your opinion on possible solutions. 78
- A foreign visitor has to spend only one day in your country. Where should that visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reason and details to support your choice. 90
- Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 78
- If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 66
- What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice 47
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a (mores)' or simply 'mores'?
Suggestion: a (mores); mores
... common diseases, better food products, a mores sustainable agriculture and society and...
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Line 2, column 937, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e so called at the time Soviet Union, by business and political means. In conclus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1244813278 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0627916157 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618257261411 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2386591265 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.272727273 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290926933578 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11631113135 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853884795263 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208296948431 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512195002278 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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