28/10/2017
Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some argue driving an automobile appears to be the best way to move around in a megalopolis. Other claim riding a bicycle is a more beneficial and efficient way to do so. Below both prospects will be analyzed and author’s opinion will be given.
On the one hand, there are some conspicuous advantages in having a vehicle. Firstly, a car allows saving a considerable volume of time because may city dwellers inhabit in the suburbs but work in the center. To illustrate, an average trip from a house to a workplace may take up to forty minutes if a car is being used, but the same journey by but will take an hour and a half. Secondly, safety is another serious merit. For instance, personal items of a motorist are safe, he will not contract a flue from someone or have an unpleasant argument with a strange while commuting. So, driving a car makes a life of a driver better and less stressful. Those are benefits associated with ownership of a private vehicle.
On the other hand, moving around on a bicycle has some supporters as well. Primarily, they point to health benefits that are acquired while riding a bike. One of the biggest is the dramatic decrease of a likelihood of having a heart attack and an overall advantageous impact on fitness and mood of a rider. Furthermore, there are many economic incentives. An owner of a two-wheel transport does not buy gasoline or pay taxes for having a car. The absence of an engine means there is no an expensive maintenance service needed. In other words, a bicycle possesses many positive characteristics that make it an attractive mean of transportation.
In my opinion, both an auto and a bicycle have valuable features but, perhaps, a car is more suitable for those who live far away from their work and a bike is better for happy individuals whose offices are situated near their homes.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: To illustrate, an average trip from a house to a workplace may take up to forty minutes if a car is being used, but the same journey by but will take an hour and a half.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a conjunction, coordinating
Suggestion: Refer to by and but
a car allows saving a considerable volume of time because may city dwellers inhabit in the suburbs
a car allows saving a considerable volume of time because many city dwellers inhabit in the suburbs
personal items of a motorist are safe, he will not contract a flue from someone...
personal items of a motorist are safe. He will not contract a flue from someone...
personal items of a motorist are safe, and he will not contract a flue from someone
One of the biggest is the dramatic decrease
One of the biggest advantages is the dramatic decrease
means there is no an expensive maintenance service needed.
means there are no expensive maintenance services needed.
make it an attractive mean of transportation.
make it an attractive means of transportation.
whose offices are situated near their homes.
whose offices are near to their homes.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2 //Double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 0
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 325 350
No. of Characters: 1480 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.246 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.554 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.715 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.056 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.583 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.287 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.465 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...The absence of an engine means there is no an expensive maintenance service needed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71384615385 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82939096882 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6435128951 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150259615027 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433208306872 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424568176345 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961261505099 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406095963827 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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