Some people assert that car is the ultimate mode of commuting in the cities for social, commercial or business activities.by contrast, other argue that bicycle is far beyond compression is the best option to travel within a city.alought both opinions have their own merits and demerits, I would like to account for both sides in my own opinion.
We can see the steady growth of the number of cars everywhere in big metropolitan areas and in remote regions as some consider that, the car provides more freedom, mobility, and independence. It also gives protection from weather conditions and ample space. Nevertheless, car use has made our commute more convenient but created travel jams, pollution, and even fatal accidents.
On the other hand, there are other means of mass transit such as bicycles, trains, and buses that can save time and money and favored by many people. Bicycling is an option that will not make one solely dependent on cars. In South East Asian countries, many people use bicycles because they are not costly, easy to handle and operate, and do not need fueling. China is a great example of the massive use of bicycles. They even have developed sophisticated programs to share bicycles for the public. But there are those people who still enjoy the pleasure of driving themselves around in a luxury car for purposes of comfort and privacy.
In conclusion, I personally believe that using bicycles can be a healthier, more economic and more environment-friendly than using cars. However, car use remains as the favorite means of transportation for people, especially in cities. In addition, bicycles are more energy-efficient in our car disruption. In many countries, we see increasing initiatives by governments to encourage the use of bicycles. That seems to be a glimmer of hope for the problems of congestion on roads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
some people assert that car is the ultimate ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, nevertheless, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07868852459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97725138333 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603278688525 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9639907381 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173355239867 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047962850151 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440940013002 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105843744427 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502744934585 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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