Ads play a great role in marketing and selling of products.Some people think that ads mislead us into buying things that we actually do not need.
Advertisements have significantly contributed in the merchandising goods extensively. There is a perception of certain people that advertisements delude the consumer's choice pertinent to the purchase of undesirable products. This essay will argue the reasons through which people get distracted inevitably. However, they highlight such products which are harmful for juvenile as well as for adults.
To begin with, majority of the advertisements compel buyers to purchase unnecessary goods in order to achieve the popularity and enhance their profit. To attain their aim, they showcase the fabricated informations which force people to buy inessentials. For instance, certain mobile companies advertise the typical features of an ordinary phone in a fascinating manner which persuade a person to purchase it without taking demand of customer into account. Indeed, that phone is not much worthy but the way advertisements highlight it's characteristics is commendable.
Moreover, advertisements of various beverages attract adults and children oftenly. Without considering the consequences of such harmful products, many renowned companies publicise their products to establish business in market. For example, commercials of several carbonated drinks have been misleading the customers from many years. The consumption of such carbonated drinks is progressively increasing that would eventually lead to the deterioration of health.
To conclude, I totally agree with the fact that adverts have played their role in misguiding people with their false claims of unnecessary products. In addition, ads mark adults and juveniles as their target without prioritising the health and deteriorating effects of their products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98785425101 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27305838778 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7800337438 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.642857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108807111201 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337672860529 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353856351984 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064861611617 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352688159713 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.17 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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