Undoubtedly, consumer items have gained ultimate importance lately. Although they save one's time and have improved the living standard, they have made lives more materialistic and self-centered. I believe that consumer goods are entirely beneficail for man if used wisely.
On one hand, conusmer goods save the precious time of people. If one has to order a product, it can be ordered via e-commerce using mobile or computer and the product would be delivered at door in no time. Therefore, one does not need to specially make time for such commitments. It not only save time, but money and energy spent in visiting the markets too. A report told that a great number of people these days are taking advantage of doing shopping online with getting their items received at their houses.
Furthermore, with advancement in the field of consumer goods, the quality of lives have become far better than ever. People are now working harder and diligently to improve their quality of life by purchasing certain goods such as air conditioner. This in turn has increased the productivity and ultimately the economy of the country.
On the other hand, excessive consumption of consumer goods have changed the personalities of people. People of contemporary era are far more materialistic than before. They try to accumlate more and more fancy and innovative items to impress others, and be considered as laud and well-off. Such behaviour has made one to be self-centered who has no concern for others.
Also, it has increased the incidence of psychological disorders in community. Because everyone cannot afford the costly products like iphone, they can fall into depression be seeing others having it whereas they are not. An article read that incidence of mental illness has alarmingly increased in this present era of running behind materialistic things both in high and low socioeconomic class.
To conclude, while consumer goods have increased the mental problems, they have positive impact on one' daily life by improving the quality. I believe the wise use of it can make our lives blessing as its advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18103448276 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85456217913 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9308366125 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.15 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134916546136 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039387469408 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037955524872 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733307169326 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038335980573 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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