With the advent of the internet increasing number of people are shopping online what issues arise from this and how can they be tackled?
Digital platforms becomes more popular in every field such as shopping,booking,banking,medical treatments. Ratio of purchasing things online is increased rapidly. There are number of causes happen from this. But certain measures could be taken to alleviate this problem.
There are several issues arise when people shopping online. The main one is number of Frauds and duplicates taken place during online purchase. It leads to loosing value of money. People can not get worthy item after spending high amount of currency. For instance , Most of the people are ordering branded clothes on shopping websites, but they may get either wrong or duplicate brand in delivery, while some shopping sites does not have a replacing facilities. Therefore that item is not worthy to buy and people feel cheated by money. In addition, small shops tend to get closed because people choose to purchase online rather than their nearest shop. It makes greater impact on small retailers.
Various possible solutions could be taken in order to tackle above situation. In the first place, people should get aware about their online purchased products. One should not attracted by huge discounts or any other alluring advertisement shown by online shops. They should check all the aspect of buying such as like, authentication of sites, ratings, demands, Stocks and price. Another Way is They should start buying grocery and homely things from nearer shops. Therefore they get fresh products instantly. It gives chance to earn for local shopkeepers.
In conclusion, whereas common issues raise like frauds and less selling items by local shops but these can be tackled by social awareness about shopping products online and giving chance to retailer. it is depend upon person's mindset about buying things by digital platform.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , booking
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , medical
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng high amount of currency. For instance , Most of the people are ordering branded...
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...s does not have a replacing facilities. Therefore that item is not worthy to buy and peop...
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Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'attract'
Suggestion: attract
...line purchased products. One should not attracted by huge discounts or any other alluring...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ry and homely things from nearer shops. Therefore they get fresh products instantly. It g...
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Line 13, column 60, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun selling is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Line 13, column 201, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Line 13, column 207, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36013986014 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87346404869 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63986013986 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3028108532 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.619047619 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301666803789 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765196682083 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654060369906 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165991465454 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316439690708 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.