Invincibly, Commercials have been proved as a powerful and lucrative way to proliferate the reachability of the product s to our contemporary society from last two decades. Advertisements are becoming part and parcel of today's life. This essay will discuss its both pragmatic and unpragmatic blooming and explain why its advantages outweigh disadvantages.
Our newfangled societies have always seems to get benefitted from these unrelenting advertisements. Firstly, it helps people to know about latest amenities and products in the market to stand a higher chance of flourishing their lives. Secondly, with profusion of product announcements, Employment prospects are also blossoming for eligible proponents. People like cartoonist, painter, director, editor, sound mixer can get jobs. Also illiterate person such as hoarding painter also got chance to make their ends meet with this kind of activity. Certainly, Advertisements is an optimistic way for both developed and fledgling nations to improve their economic as well as chores prospects for their citizens.
Contrastively, Advertisements also develop gloomy things for the public. To commence with, Due to high investments done on commercials; products prices are apparently high. So for impoverished or deprived citizens' its become out of reach to get those products and this conditions are even becoming deteriorated. Secondly, People buy these products even they do not need this just because this advertisements done by their favourite sportsman or film-star, they have urge to get those products. However, one can stop himself from buying those amenities or products if they can survive without them.
To recapitulate the aforementioned views, this essay discussed both optimistic and pessimistic development of advertisements. I do surmise that it is a positive development for both public and its manufacturers.
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- Test and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages? Give reasons and examples. 73
- In countries where there is a high unemployment rate, most pupils should be offered only primary education, there is no point in providing secondary education for those who will have no hope in finding a job. Do you agree or disagree? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79919678715 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4095084672 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63453815261 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.917979697 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106218760259 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467270364866 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627855854517 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699766128265 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224553764964 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.06 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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