Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter :
.Say why a driving licence is advantageous.
.recommend a driving school.
.give an extra guidance/tips
Dear Monica,
I am glad you have finally come around to the idea of learning to drive. You cannot begin to imagine how your life will change once you get your driving licence.
Speaking my own experiences, having a licence opens up a whole new range of possiblities. You have the freedom to go where you want without having to restrict yourself to the vagaries of public transport or be dependent on someone to drive you to your destination.
But first things first. You need to find a good driving school with supportive and patient instructors. I thoroughly recommend the Ace driving school in the town centre. If you sign up for a course of lessons there, I am sure you would not be disappointed! All the instructors there are very professional and dedicated. If, however, you don't hit it off with one instructor, no-one will mind if you change instructors. It happens more often than you might imagine.
I think it would be good idea to sign up for a course of 20 lessons to begin with, so you can get a special discount.You will probably need a few more than 20 lessons, though, to become proficient, especially now as you have to sit a computer-based exam which tests your theoretical knowledge of driving.
Finally, If you don't pass your driving test first time, don't worry. Few people do, so don't give up!
Well, that's all for now. I hope my advice has been of use to you! I look forward to hearing how you are getting on with your driving lessons.
Love,
Susie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nowledge of driving. Finally, If you dont pass your driving test first time, dont...
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...dont pass your driving test first time, dont worry. Few people do, so dont give up! ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, well, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63396226415 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67351499889 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8796051092 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7142857143 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156935669542 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067135425201 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648180540839 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105172489622 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442986410648 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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